If your bored and need something to read or do

Public Chat

Moderators: William Ohmsford Verified, AC1 Guild Leaders

Post Reply
User avatar
Silver-wolfe Verified
Head A-Hole
Head A-Hole
Reactions:
Posts: 150
Joined: Wed Apr 17, 2002 7:24 pm
Answers: 0
United States of America

If your bored and need something to read or do

Post by Silver-wolfe Verified »

you can check out our Story forum, were i am currently roughing out a new story i'm writeing. its currently titled Adagio.

For those who haven't read it yet the full current rough drafting can be found

HERE

since i have went though and added and removed some stuff from the main body of work it might be best to re read the full current story again even if you had read it all prior to the nov 18 update.

If you have read the Story up to this point and feel like just reading the newest added portion it can be found

HERE

Thoughts and comment to help improve the story are welcome as it is still in a very rough state. i'd like to be able to refine it, this is all a big experiment on my part.

i must warn you that although the narrative is decent the dialogue i feel is weak as i've been suffering a bout with writers block, so the conversations come off as a bit hoky. but felt the dialogue needed to be in there to at least denote that that is where some form of it should be :P

thx

Silver

"So we'll go no more a roving
So late into the night,
Though the heart be still as loving,
And the moon be still as bright.

For the sword outwears its sheath,
And the soul wears out the breast,
And the heart must pause to breathe,
And Love itself have rest.

Though the night was made for loving,
And the day returns too soon,
Yet we'll go no more a roving
By the light of the moon."
Top
User avatar
Silver-wolfe Verified
Head A-Hole
Head A-Hole
Reactions:
Posts: 150
Joined: Wed Apr 17, 2002 7:24 pm
Answers: 0
United States of America

Post by Silver-wolfe Verified »

haha, no Adagio is a movement in music, a slow and steady pace set

:)

and yes

:needhug:

"So we'll go no more a roving
So late into the night,
Though the heart be still as loving,
And the moon be still as bright.

For the sword outwears its sheath,
And the soul wears out the breast,
And the heart must pause to breathe,
And Love itself have rest.

Though the night was made for loving,
And the day returns too soon,
Yet we'll go no more a roving
By the light of the moon."
Top
Noob Siabot
Tiaya's Boy Toy
Reactions:
Posts: 423
Joined: Mon Jan 20, 2003 12:20 pm
Answers: 0
Location: The back seat of your car, duct tape in hand
Contact:
Contact Noob Siabot

Post by Noob Siabot »

Boooooo Nobody cares go home boooooooo! u suk!

You shot me but you punks didn't finish, now you 'bout to feel the wrath of a menace
Life-time member/co-founder of the board trolling guild "The Wolfpack" :alien:
Top
User avatar
kreep
Silver's sister, Hands off - HoB
Reactions:
Posts: 380
Joined: Thu Jul 04, 2002 10:22 pm
Answers: 0
Location: never-neverland
Contact:
Contact kreep

Post by kreep »

head butts noob

"If you post it they will come..." - Willy
Image
Silver says, "you know the saying, there are two things that can set people off and always get them debating: religon and politics"
kreepy says," yeah i've heard that - i thought there was a 3rd one"
Silver says, "nah no 3rd one"
kreepy says, "oh yeah it was the great pumpkin"
Silver says, "you are the great pumpkin..."

Top
Post Reply

Return to “AC Public Chat”