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just want sticky area for the stories and revisions, but feel free to spam up this lower portion with critiqueing spam
Mike
ooops! goes to delete her 20 pages of spam on mike's thread
okay i hadn't read that last part, i thought i had, didnt' see that it was updated again...oopsie....
i liked the visual description you gave about the water, like i was seeing it instead of reading it; and i'm confused about what the conversation between thomas and morghan is dealing with, but i think that's okay...like i'll find out later...if you keep writing that is!
the shadowy figure though...oooh mysterious!!