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just want sticky area for the stories and revisions, but feel free to spam up this lower portion with critiqueing spam
Mike
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"So we'll go no more a roving
So late into the night,
Though the heart be still as loving,
And the moon be still as bright.
For the sword outwears its sheath,
And the soul wears out the breast,
And the heart must pause to breathe,
And Love itself have rest.
Though the night was made for loving,
And the day returns too soon,
Yet we'll go no more a roving
By the light of the moon."
So late into the night,
Though the heart be still as loving,
And the moon be still as bright.
For the sword outwears its sheath,
And the soul wears out the breast,
And the heart must pause to breathe,
And Love itself have rest.
Though the night was made for loving,
And the day returns too soon,
Yet we'll go no more a roving
By the light of the moon."
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kreep
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ooops! goes to delete her 20 pages of spam on mike's thread
"If you post it they will come..." - Willy
Silver says, "you know the saying, there are two things that can set people off and always get them debating: religon and politics"
kreepy says," yeah i've heard that - i thought there was a 3rd one"
Silver says, "nah no 3rd one"
kreepy says, "oh yeah it was the great pumpkin"
Silver says, "you are the great pumpkin..."
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okay i hadn't read that last part, i thought i had, didnt' see that it was updated again...oopsie....
i liked the visual description you gave about the water, like i was seeing it instead of reading it; and i'm confused about what the conversation between thomas and morghan is dealing with, but i think that's okay...like i'll find out later...if you keep writing that is!
the shadowy figure though...oooh mysterious!!
"If you post it they will come..." - Willy
Silver says, "you know the saying, there are two things that can set people off and always get them debating: religon and politics"
kreepy says," yeah i've heard that - i thought there was a 3rd one"
Silver says, "nah no 3rd one"
kreepy says, "oh yeah it was the great pumpkin"
Silver says, "you are the great pumpkin..."